Okay this is a pretty nice clean layout, like the colours you chose aswell.

Not sure about the font you used for the top "vectortea" I don't know, just doesn't work for me.

And also the top where it says "graphic design" it cuts off, I know you intended that, because i've tried doing that before, but it's hard to get right without looking cut off. If that makes sense?

For your feature part, maybe add a little text, just to let the person viewing know what they are going to be looking at instead of just the picture. For instance "This piece is by.... (Read More)" that kinda thing.

Other than that, I like this Will you be adding more to this page? It's a bit squished, but I think I like it like that, can't decide

i actually like the layout
but the only think i slightly dislike is
the fact the the viewer section is larger
than your about section.
in my personal opinion the about section
shoule be larger, making it the main focus on
your page. because it is the main thing on this.
but hey thats just me

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I'm going to have to say the opposite. I think the art and designs should come over the text blurb about me. People hardly read text anyway.

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Instead of the current vectortea font, what would you suggest? Could you name some styles or font faces?

I also intend to move the cut off text upwards, as it appears to be giving people trouble.

As for the read more, I'll consider that too. Maybe, if anything, a title. Who knows.

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I am unsure of the color scheme and it seems flat to me. Like most professional pages have some shading and such around the boxes or make them uneven, but lined up, to create interest.

I don't know. it is a very simple layout, but it could use a little tinkering with.

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The first thing that gets is that, especially for a vector guy, the font renderings are extremely fuzzy in the title boxes. They just don't blend in with the site at all.

Also, before I forget, for the bottom bar, just do what you have, but invert it so its black text on white. Or do a faint grey so its visible, but not disctracting. Either way, doing it without the black bg will keep attention away from it. And center it.

Your title bar cutting off the text bugs the hell out of me. Maybe do some design stuff at the bottom edge to blend it a bit, and not make it so obvious that you just have large text. The ladies love large text, but not when it doesn't fit, if you catch my drift.

The top box not going all the way across the screen caught my eye as a distraction. Either get rid of the stripes, or make the box go all the way across.

The content boxes need a border of some sort. I don't know what, but stripes cutting off without reason always bugs me.

If you were to replace the 3px white with 1px neon, I think it could work well, just so long as you picked a really solid color. It would make or break the layout.

Each of the 'ersonal' boxes could use a 1px black border. I really love the thick white for the background and border, but I think a small black border would seperate the images really nicely. (As a side thought, in the actual site implimentation, I'd have it coded so that when you hover on a given box, the other two dim).


That's all for now

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Yeah, give these a try. I just uploaded them to my freewebs account.

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May not be to your liking, not sure. Fits quite well though.

Thanks for the input. I messed with adding some depth, but overall, I feel like the flat look is what I want to go with. To me, I think the flat looks makes the page less flashy and more art-oriented, as well as providing a unique feel that competitors do not have.

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I'm fixing the fonts now. It was bothering me too. Going to increase their thickness and change the smoothing style. Looks much better now.

I just took that bottom bar out. Screw it. It made the site look like a big box anyway.

The title now does not cut off except for the very topmost and bottommost. This way it still bleeds to white, but it's not just chopped. Hopefully a suitable compromise.

As for all the other stuff, I'm going to tool around with it tomorrow after work and see what I can get going.

Thanks so much for the input.

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